Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Vroom Vroom.....

8…7…6…
…5
…4
…3
Vroom…. The accelerator swung to the hilt…
…2……1
Screech! Halt! Red!

Damn!!! She thumped the handle of the bike hard in disappointment, as she saw the red Bajaj Avenger slid through the gap and clear the signal just in time. She stood there right at the yellow line, her gloved hands rhythmically tapping at the wind shield, the rhythm of her impatience. She pulled out the ipod from the pocket of her jacket and hastily flicked through radio stations looking for some catchy number that would drown her disappointment at the no-stake race, she just lost with the stranger.

She hated red lights… she hated having to brake… she hated to halt… hated to lose.

She was Velocity personified. Action, adventure, speed and thrill kept her going. She was among those few people who constantly lived on the edge of life, staring at death every moment and yet managing to duck it. To her everyday was the last of her life, and she wanted to live it to the fullest.

15 more seconds of wait before she would be flying on the wings of speed again.

Just then, a yellow Karizma, glided in a zig-zag from between the cars and stood by her side. There was something different about this new invasion, a presence that somehow demanded attention. She stole a quick admiring look at it, in a way not to make it too conspicuous. “Bold and beautiful!” she thought, with a new glint in her eyes. Here was her next fellow player at the game of SPEED.

The numbers at the signal now started to flicker, 5… 4… 3… 2…
And before it showed 1… she released the brakes and turned the accelerator full on and zipped past the light, overtaking the Karizma, blocking its way. This was often her way to invite a race. She loved to prick a man’s ego and watch him react to it in vengeance. She had known by experience, that no man on the surface of the earth, can ever come to terms with a woman overtaking him on the road. And true to his breed, the yellow Karizma pepped up and in no time was right by her side, speeding. She smiled to herself and then the entire traffic became inconsequential. All she could see was the shining yellow body, all she could hear was the wind slapping hard against her helmet, all that mattered was the speed, the race, the victory.

Both the bikes zipped through the congested lanes of the Airport road in the late evening, at unearthly speed… a little twist of the handle, a little slant to avoid a rear-view mirror…a pulse of brake to let the kid cross the road… and a continuous breath-taking speed. For a moment he would find himself far ahead, and in the next, she would be right besides him. Sometimes, they would lose sight of each other in the crowd and the sting of disappointment would only have seeped skin deep, before they would track each other again.

And the race lasted 15 kms with no true victory or loss, just the points ticking away… sometimes in favour of him, sometimes her. And then came the by-lane, the cleavage on the road where their paths were to part. She gave the left indicator, indicating her departure to him and immediately he was by her side. A stretch of about 200 metres lay in front of them before the turn. Both the bikes by now slowed down, as if panting for breath. They then moved together at the same speed, in perfect sync, in perfect harmony… like the moves of a couple in a beautifully synchronized, romantic, dance performance. They played, they flirted, they communicated, all with the twists and sways of their bike, the distance and proximity between their imaginary loci… the rising and falling of the road like the rhythm of their breath… till the point of the cleavage. There they lingered for a brief second, while their bikes were still in motion. He instantly reached out for the flap of his formula one helmet, and for the first time in the last 20 minutes of their acquaintance, she caught a glimpse of his deep set eyes…and in that moment, she saw nothing else. She couldn’t make out the colour of the eyes, but there was a strange power in them… a power that held you captive for a moment. There was something about those eyes, she thought… something piercing, somethin that knocked straight at your heart… a strange honesty, a strange spark. He gave a slight, reluctant smile and raised his gloved hand in a thumbs-up. She had never experienced this kind of sporting spirit before. She twisted the handle of her bike and slanted towards the turn, her mind totally confused on one hand, and on the other furiously debating whether to return the friendly gesture. She hastily turned her head for one last look of him and there he was still moving slowly across the turn, his gaze fixed in her direction. An instantaneous smile broke on her lips and she raised her hands to him in a hi-five. They both smiled and the next moment, the accelerators were turned full on and both the bikes zoomed off in different directions, bound by different destinations.

:-)

49 comments:

Impressionist said...

Racing on busy streets is not good! :P
Offensive riding! :P lol! they shud cancel ur license first!
U will be run over by some vehicle if u do that! idiot! U want to die? lol!

peace & love
Jeevy

silentmind said...

Too Fast Too (Romantically)Furious! :D

@ Rajeev: The person in question does not have a license to drive.


(A hurried comment!! Sorry!! wil elaborate a lot later in the day!)
but a very well written piece!
:)

Winged Fantasy said...

@rajeev: hahahahhaa... one needs to have a license for it to be canceled. :P
Death, if it has to come, shall come sooner or later.
There is a song in Hindi...
"Marne ke darr se mere dil,
jeena naa tu chhod dena...
Rone ke darr se jahan mein,
Hansna naa tu chhod dena..."
hehehehhe... :-)

@Silence: hahahaha... somethings set their pace themselves. They are beyond control. ;-) :P
And thanks for enlightening Rajeev on it. But let me tell you, the person in question is a damn good rider. :P
Thanks Silence. Will wait for your detailed comment.

Arz kiya hai...

Intezar mein katenge lamhein beqarari ke,
Ki abhi chand lafhzon ka qarar baaqi hai...
Waqt ki reth se kehdo zara aahista phisle,
Ki abhi unke aane mein kuch der baaqi hai...
Intezar toh hum karenge quayamat tak magar,
Qayamat ki shaam aani abhi baaqi hai...
Zindagi ki naau khadi hai kagaar par magar,
Abhi rooh mein kuch saanse aur baaqi hai...

:-)

Pallav said...

humm...and there i was hoping for a crash and two horrible deaths like that old ad on doordarshan of the apple and steel rods!! :D

Well written but ipods don't have radio, at least the apple ones don't!

and a guy wearing gloves on a karizma bike? That's GAY power!!

Nice idea though, i could write a poem on this! think i'll do :)

N

Winged Fantasy said...

@Nothingman: hahahahha... sorry for the disappointment Nothingman. I am in a hopelessly positive mode these days. ;-)

ah oh! sorry I meant a music player. I have a Samsung YP-K3 and it does have radio. I dont know why I call it an ipod though. :(
I guess its like how Xerox (a company) has beconme synonymous to the process of photocopying? sorry for the wrong usage. :-)

Haan? Gay? why? how? I didnt get it. why cant a guy riding a karizma wear a jacket and gloves? I had those leather ones in mind. I am lost now. :(

Hey thats great. Will wait for your poem. Do it soon. :-)

Cheers!

silentmind said...

This just keeps getting better and better!! Am Loving it! :D

A nice written piece… and then comes a old classic in comment section... [Thank God we can’t hear! ;)] which is followed by an equally immaculate shayari… [I prefer to call it shayari than a poem!]

The best part of this piece is that, at some point in time, everyone has experienced this, though I must say majority of us have never been lucky enough! :(
But never mind…that’s an advantage to be an optimist, I personally dun leave a single chance to have such an encounter! :P

As far as being an MCP is concerned, I personally like it when fairer sex is ahead of me…how else can u check them out!! :P

Hhmm,..guess am short of words here…but hope u never fall short of them and keep up the good job!

Have a great day! 

Winged Fantasy said...

@Silence: Thanku! :-)
And dont worry, someday I shall subject you to the torture of hearing it. :P
And yeah u r right! It is indeed a shayari. :-)

hahahahha... Righto! :P
However, there are other ways of checking out too. Among one of the most romantic nano love stories that I have heard, is a story of a friend, whose love began and ended on the surface of the rear view mirror! :P

:-) Thanks once again Silence. :-)

humbl devil said...

aaah!!!
kambhakht zindagi...
ek mode mai milati hai...
aur agle mai...

Anonymous said...

Really well told. The movie was before me as I read the post. Played down this might appear, but that's the best compliment I think I can give any work of writing. Further, it seemed to me a blockbuster movie at that.

Though, keep the heroes of such stories on a Pulsar sometimes too. It makes me feel better :)

Winged Fantasy said...

@humbl: waah waah... this managed to get Hindi out of humbl? not bad at all! ;-) :P
hahahahha... another song says....
"Kuch khona hai kuch paana hai... jeevan ka khel purana hai... jabtak yeh saans rahegi,
yaara bas yun chalte jaana hai." :D

@Sushant: hahahahha... no wonder some people call me "melodrama queen" ;-)
How can I dare take it otherwise, but as a compliment... and a wonderful compliment at that. :-) Thanks Sushant. And yeah point taken. Next time I race, I will make sure I compete with a Pulsar. :D

Winged Fantasy said...

OK people! Confession time! :-)
The story was mine.
I love biking, I love racing...
And Jeevy and Silence, I dont have a license too. :-)
But not all of the story was true. The racing was a fact, the cheering at the end (thumbs-up) was a fact. But the romantic element was fiction. It was just to add that little zing to the story. ;-) hehehehhee... :-)

Aruni RC said...

Wow!

U're definitely more adventurous than what one expects! Way to go, biker-blogger. And you're pretty accurate abt the female overtake ...

The romance was just the right zing. Or wazss it the vroom?

Bharti Bedi said...

hey really nice one..the ned was a surprising and cute
its awesome to race with strangers at times!!!
i used to do that a lot bt mostly on my bicyclye;)

hope she meets him again...lol

Amandeep Singh said...

Man I loved this to the core...
:)

Yoda said...

Listening to Pentagram - Deep Down as I read this, extremely racyyyy.

Unknown said...

You racing on Airport road ;) ? And you tell me that nuthing has changed ????

:p

Winged Fantasy said...

@aruni rc: hahahaha... expectations ofen mislead you. ;-)
hehehhehe... it was both the zing and the vroom. :-)

@the island girl: thanku girl. :-) I hope she does. :-)

@standbymind: hehehhe.. thanks Aman. I am glad u liked it. :-)

@ajit: Havent heard it. Pardon my ignorance, but what is that? :(

@Vibhanshu: hahahahha... yeah I raced on airport road. I do it often. and still I maintain, "Nothing has changed". ;-) :P

Anonymous said...

racing is fun and excitement but at times it leads to disasters...im sure u understand the imp of life...
well written...but the act is not appreciated...be careful henceforth...n im sure u wudnt have told anyone abt this at home...

Winged Fantasy said...

@anonymous: Is this you Ms. Rangoli Singh? I have a feeling this is you. Cannot be anyone else. hehehehehe :P
and ofcourse didnt say at home. :D
But I will be careful. Pakka. :-)

Anonymous said...

who else can write that madamji...

AakASH!!! said...

Since when has this thing been running? I only knew of the other one. :(
Bataaya bhi nahin.

Pallav said...

umm you changed your blog address? This is weird...i'll have to update the feeds and links and so many others will have to do too!
Any particular reason for Wings off antasy? who is this antasy creature??? it doesn't make any sense!! me so puzzled!!

N

Amandeep Singh said...

Hey Meenakshi

Cool template :)
Shall update my link!

Cheeers( btw,how r yaaa?)

KP said...

hmmm......fast and furious and without a licence...be careful while racing.....nice post...:) u got skills.....

Shyama said...

wow... loved it... the story has a certain spark to it.. beautiful... linked ya... cheers!

Anonymous said...

This is lovely reading....fast, furious, romantic & add to it speeding with a stranger....all blended wonderfully well & the story just ended in seconds...this is nothing but, life at the fast lane and we all love spending a few moments in this lane....nicely written!

Enlightener said...

Hey You have a wonderful blog...Its really cool..Kudos...

Winged Fantasy said...

@aakash: hmmmm... batane ka mauka hi nahi mila tha tab. Tumne khud hi dhoondh liya the same day I changed it. :-)

@Nothingman: Well the reason is sheer boredom. With the person that I am and my own identity. Sometimes it becomes so difficult to tolerate oneself, even if you love that self dearly. :-)
So just a break from myself, trying to find another identity in the "antasy" creature. ;-)

Winged Fantasy said...

@standbymind: Thanks Aman. hmmmmmm life is okay. Nothing much... You tell me, how is it going? :-)

@kp: thanbks Kevin. :-)

@shimmer: Thanks Shimmer and welcome here. You are linked too and let me tell you, you are a wonderful wonderful poet. :-)

Cheers!

Winged Fantasy said...

@Kalyan: Yeah precisely. Life in the fast lane... and coming to think about it, we spend most of our lives there... physically and metaphorically. [ok ok bahut philosophy jhaad li ;-)] Thanks Kalyan. :-)

@enlightener: Hey thanku [takes a bow]
Was a pleasure going through all three of ur blogs. :-)

Cheers!

Matangi Mawley said...

narration is superb! liked the way u had ended it! good work!

Aks said...

Finally, I am back into my very own world of blogging and girl I am enthralled at reading this creation. Reminds me all my college days when I have done this umpteen times only to change directions inside the campus after a race of 12 kms...
damn !! Chandigarh roads are perfect fit for this kinda activity ;) you got to have spirit to get going there. (For all those who are scared of speeding)
Beautifully written as always !!

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

Torque meets Murder('Kaho na kaho' song sequence) meets girl-power.
Great flights of fantasy!!!
Good writing as always...

Winged Fantasy said...

@matangi: Thank you matangi. :-)

@Aks: Hey buddy. welcome back. :-) You bet... You need the spirit and the zing ;-)... Thank u Aks and great to see you back. :-)

@Sujoy: Aaah I was wondering who this is till I visited your blog. My Lord Jim, great to know you by your worldly name. :D
And Thank you. :-)

Aruni RC said...

And after the bouts of congrats on a vrooming flight of fantasy . . . let's hear something new from you, Meenakshi.

(and yeah, i'm pretty irregular when it comes to blogging...)

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

New posts plz....ain't a writers' block we hope

Pallav said...

Hello...long time no see, by the way your old blog address is taken over by alien bots.

just thought i'd pop in to tell ya ;)

N

harshad said...

hello!!
hey great post...really gripping! was tht u racing btw? :-P
i tried to b on ur blog earlier..but it was for invitees only or something. great to be back now tho!

Pallav said...

meenakshi ji, ek choti si gujarish hai. ek naya blog banaya hai,

www.khatarnakshabd.blogspot.com

blog hindi mein hai, agar aap aa kar do shabd kahengi to mujhe bahut accha lagega :)

dhanyawad :)

N

Lalith said...

nice ... i guess the ending is the best part .. :) .. the thing i like most about your posts is that you pick .. simple everyday happenings ... and present them so nicely. Keep it going!

Cheers,
Lalith

Jyoti said...

i know my birthday is lucky number for you..but sweety that does not mean that you stop writting after that! Chalo..age badho....

manisha said...

beautiful description..esp wen it concerns a gal...its egoistic bt i love being a feminist!!!....:0....oieeee do visit my blog!!!

Veg said...

hey there~!! u rly have a way with words.. i was totally caught up there!! :) Cheers~

Amandeep Singh said...

hey where r yaaa?

Aruni RC said...

Hey there, Meenakshi. It's really been a long time since I stepped ur way - and u still invisible? Don't tell me that the winged fantasy has flown away...

Matangi Mawley said...

do post more freq! :)

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Archana said...

Brilliant style of writing...its like creating romance by using the simplest of words... very well written!

Arti Honrao said...

Nice and interesting post!
Somehow, I knew how it would end :)

BTW, jo sher aapne ek comment reply mein arz kiya hai it is too mast...
am copying it for collection :D


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