Tuesday, September 4, 2007

Soul-mates

He kept glancing at his watch impatiently… He almost expected it to tick twice in a second. It was not yet 6.00, and though his practical sense told him that there was still time, his eyes were already anxiously searching for her amidst the crowd. He had never seen her, she had never met him, and yet they were sure, they would recognize each other the moment their presence overlapped. It was an unsaid test for them, to measure their response to each other’s vibes.

There were still ten minutes to go, while he stood, his eyes fixed at the entrance of the mall. And he saw a girl enter… She was wearing a white, cotton salwar kameez with a bright red dupatta thrown around her neck. His gaze settled on her for a few seconds and his heart it seemed would leap out of his chest. He knew… it was Her.

He started walking towards her as if pulled by a strange magnetic power, she was pulled in his direction by a similar force… and as they stood separated by a couple of feet’s distance, there was a moment of confusion, a shiver that passed through them. They did not know how to greet each other… with a formal shake of a hand, or a more warm gesture of a hug. They had hugged each other several times over the virtual medium of online chat… but that was nothing in comparison to this stark reality… this tangible, flesh and bone person, this face with expressions, with reaction. This was so much more substantial, so much more fearsome and so much more awesome.

With such million thoughts and a myriad of emotions running in their minds and hearts, the confusion prevailed, and they failed to even utter the simple courteous “hello”. With a light smile of quivering lips and uncertain eyes, they walked towards the coffee shop. He ordered her favourite Café Frappe, she chose his simple n plain Cappuccino. After knowing each other for a year now, they knew everything about the other, and yet today was the day to fix the jigsaw puzzle, the last piece of the puzzle, the head was to be placed today… that would determine whether the picture turns out to be an angel or a demon. It was the deciding day of how their relationship would move further, which way their lives would turn.

Slowly conversation began with some effort, intervened by many awkward pauses… And then they started talking about the thing they both were most comfortable with, their chat sessions. They began talking about the several little secrets they had disclosed about themselves, the several, tiny little incidents of life as a child, as an adolescent, as an adult… and they began to laugh their most natural laughs… the soulful laughs… It didn’t matter anymore how the head looked, it fixed perfectly in the puzzle and that was what was important. The very thought contented them and they wished to know what the other felt. Was the comfort both ways? Was the connect mutual? Did the other feel the same?

For a brief moment their eyes met.

His gaze held hers… and it seemed, their hearts melted the silence, that rippled through their eyes…

Their vision blurred, thoughts clouded, and the two hearts together skipped a beat… and before they knew it, the moment passed…
She lowered her gaze, he looked away…

And the next instant, when their eyes met, it was clearly visible, plain, simple, straightforward…His love reflected in her eyes… Her trust shined through his… and the spark of the moment ignited both their souls.

She sipped the last drop of the now cold Cappuccino and they quietly walked out together… her hand in his, their fingers slightly entwined… perhaps emulating their souls which, at that very moment, lay entwined in their own silent, virtual world…

Perhaps this is how soul-mates meet.

Dear Reader, Its been long since I wrote anything... and I would not call it anything, but pure lethargy. And hope that henceforth I shall be more attentive here and responsive. :-)
Cheers!
Meenakshi

29 comments:

silentmind said...

It is being said that the feeling of love is the most divine and pious of all. This piece just re-enforces that thought.
For me, it does not matter actually if the head fits in or not...the connection is already made, their hearts are connected and their souls were united long before they even met or even thought of meeting each other.
I truly agree with the author, this is the way soul mates meet.

And, here I think we should all take a moment off and thank the initiators / founders of this wonderful thing called G-talk / Orkut and others. :)

humbl devil said...

blown away!!!
now that's an electrifying romantic story???
taken a cue from anybody closer home???
:D

Winged Fantasy said...

@silence: Yes I agree... love for sure is the most divine and pious of all emotions. :-)
Yeah the connection was established long back even without the physicality, but if that factor fits too, it is an enviable perfection... isn't it? ;-)
hahahahha... yeah! a standing ovation for who created g-talk and orkut and the other networks, for I truly know many who have met their soul-mates on these virtual forums. :-)

@humbl: hahahahha... ofcourse... very close... can anything be closer than one's own imagination? ;-)
hehehehhe thanks humbl. :-)

Impressionist said...

I guess thats the way soul mates meet! :D hehe!
but i sense something fishy here. Is this ur story!? :>
*wink wink*

peace & love
Jeevy

Anonymous said...

Just been through the piece..and I guess the Author has captured the most honest and innocent expression of love here.

Such expressions come only when experienced though. :)

Matangi Mawley said...

a page off u'r own book? no offence.. just curious! nice though..

Winged Fantasy said...

@rajeev: uhhh jeevy... why is everyone finding it fishy? Its NOT my story... but well... errr... I dont mind if turns out to be mine at some point of time. ;-)
hehehehhe [wink wink]... :-)

@anonymous: Anon, the author is really glad that you visited her blog and found in it an honest expression. :-)
And well... about experiences... some experience are real, some though fictitious, seem nothing less than real... dont they? :-)

Winged Fantasy said...

@matangi: No dear... its not my story, nor any that I have heard... though its a common story and can be a page off anyone's book. :-)
thanks. Cheers!

Lalith said...

nice one .. :) i love the simplicity of your story ... seems so real :). Take a bow

Cheers,
Lalith

Anonymous said...

Well I agree with you madam, some experiences even though unreal seem to be closer to our hearts than most of the real ones, where you do not have much of a control over them.

And its always a pleasure to read and experience honesty in today's world.

KP said...

Simple Love Story...:) A great Description....:D

Anonymous said...

The Nicest Post.

Winged Fantasy said...

@anonymous: My pleasure and honour Sir to win your agreement. :-)
Anon, you seem to be very responsive here, can I have the priviledge of knowing you by a name? doesnt matter real or fake, but just an identity is what I ask. :-)

@Kevin Patel: Hello Kevin. :-)
Thanks for dropping by at this blog and really glad you liked the description. :-) Cheers!

@Sushant: Thanku thanku. :-)
But where are you? come back to blogging... blogspot is missing you. :-)

Anonymous said...

Hey I have tagged U!
go to my blog to read the rules! :D
I havent tagged u in my blog, I just felt that ur away frm blogging for too long! do this tag asap! :D
SUFFER! *Grin*

peace & love
Jeevy

AakASH!!! said...

ufff!

Arz kiya hai:

kaash itni aasaan yeh zindagi bhi hoti
yun hum par meharbaan yeh tishnagi bhi hoti

jee lete chaar pal sar-e-ishq mein hi hum
'gar aatish-e-pinhaa yeh dillagi bhi hoti

Winged Fantasy said...

@lalith: Oh sorry missed ur comment in between. Thanks a ton Lalith... I am so glad you liked it... and I take a low bow. :-)

@anonymous: Jeevy... grrrrrrrr... u tagged me? :(
uuuh ok... nevermind. U shall bear the consequences... ;-)

@aakash!!!: Subhanallah!!! kya likha hai... humne itni jattojahat ki, ki kuch karke iske anukool kuch keh saken... par naakamiyab rahe... humare shabd, itni sundar rachna ke shaan mein kuch keh hi naa paaye. :-) Honestly aakash, very well written. :-)

Puneet said...

How simple and how full of events...beautifully written
"their hear melt silence" too good to feel.....

Jay said...

wow...electrifying...

Winged Fantasy said...

@puneet: :-) thank u thanku :-)

@jay cam: thank u Jay for visiting and commenting. :-)

Aruni RC said...

This story is ... nice. Simple, almost too expected. But know what? Nowadays with so many grey tales of unfulfilment, this one rocks!
Lucky bugs, those two.

...and what's this abt being a reflection of ur own life? heh heh.

Deepak said...

woow !!!
well expressed....while i was reading , i was lost so that as m a part of this post..:)

The Devil's Paradise....... said...

u r too good...
great read..
too engrossing...
gifted...



P.S-new post

Winged Fantasy said...

@aruni rc: Thanks aruni... yeah its very predictable... perhaps too ideal. But nevertheless, we do wish for the ideal somewhere, before the bug of reality bites. :)

It may be a reflection of my own life, only without the ray of incidence... ;-)hahahahha

@deepak: Thanks Deepak... welcome here. and dream on... it cud be u too. :-)

@devil's paradise: hey thanks for such a abundant shower of praises. Now I am thinking does it deserve so much applause? :-) But thanks anyway. :-)

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

wish in real life too online affairs ended in such love...
most of the time these days they end up on more bitter notes.

Winged Fantasy said...

@lord jim: I wish all stories ended as "lived happily ever after"... but well, as reality would have it, they dont. Though I dont think online love stories end on bitter notes. Most often they fade away into obscurity. Without a reason, any tangibility, they are just lost, just as whimsically as they were fantasized. :-)

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

and yet some live in fantasies

Rangoli Singh said...

hmmm...thats how soul mates meet...n havent u heard of such stories???i thought u have seen something very similar very closely...

manisha said...

yeah-a lot can happen over a coffee :P.......

Neha said...

You are just too good,the further I read I am just amazed again and again by your writing,
TOO GOOD....