Gaps in conversation
Drift and become gaps in relations
Leaving a gap in thought and comprehension.
As I gape at the gap in life itself,
I see the need to fill it… I talk.
Note: Wish we could talk more and more openly, then generation gaps or gaps as long as a generation wouldn't exist in our relationships.
11 comments:
Talk...
to me perhaps.
Maybe...
that would help.
:-)
hmm...talk..coz thts the only way to fill these gaps..
Fir se khamoshi
khamosh muskaan ki
when there's a gap
take a quick nap
@Rangoli: hmmm...its the only way. I am trying and you know it :-)
@Aakash: :-)
Shabd piro rakhe the kachche dhaage mein,
Zaraa si taan par toot gaye.
Bas ek muskaan ka hi aasra tha,
Jo dilon mein saaz ban jaye...
Khamoshi mein awaaz ban jaaye...
@Sushant: A strange idea indeed. Did u mean a nap literally or figuratively?
Dhaage kachhe nahin the itne
wajan hi kuch jyaada tha,
Alfaazon ko jitna samjhaa
woh dar-asal aadha tha.
Taan chhedi nahin thi tumne
raag woh khamoshi ke the
Jo tuuta hai saaj, juda kab
sawaal bas itne se the
Aasra ho muskurahat ka
ya ankahi ka asar ho
khamoshi bhi bol uthegi
jo dilon mein basar ho
Fir se ab inko aazmalo
Todo jodo afsaane jitne
Ek koshish kar ke bhi dekho
dhaage kachche nahin hain itne.
Nothing compared to yours, just an attempt.
@Aakash: Y so modest? It was beautiful :-)
Chalo phir ek baar aazmalen inhe,
Bharosa jo tum dilate ho…
Us bharose par bharosa karlen,
Sapne jinke dikhlate ho...
Naye shabd phir piroyen aaj,
Dhaagon mein yun gaanth bandh,
Saaz naye phir cheden aaj,
Khamoshi bhi ho jaye maand.
Par haan zaraa aahista,
Dhaaga tootne na paaye...
Saaz cheden is tarah,
Ki shor naa ban jaaye…
Jo abki baar toote,
Toh phir na jud payenge
Jo jud bhi gaye yada kada,
Toh jod sada reh jayenge...
Phir bhi chalo aaj koshish karlen,
Alfaason ka arth samajhlen...
Sahara muskaan ka naa lekar,
Muskurahat ko hi manzil karlen...
Ever tried watching the gaps between your in-breath and out-breath? The gap between thots? And the gaps between the words we speak?
Awesome! marhabaa marhabaa!
@Indraneel: Yes you are right. Never thought about these gaps... Very true... these gaps that you spoke about ensure you dont get breathless... Aah so here is a positive connotation of Gaps. Thanks for visiting and leaving a comment. Really glad :-)
@Aakash: Shukriya... bas aapki zehnawazi hai... warna hum iske kaabil kahan :-)
Aapke shabdon se prerit hokar ek choti si koshish ki hai :-)
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